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What is up with the writing style?! It's all "I will..." this and "I will..." that. How about "I'll"!!!!
It's making the story very jilted and formal and it's not flowing very well
— Jun 16, 2021 01:03PM
What is up with the writing style?! It's all "I will..." this and "I will..." that. How about "I'll"!!!!
It's making the story very jilted and formal and it's not flowing very well
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