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Angel
Angel is 10% done
So far, what it seems to be, or better sounds like, if that makes sense, is the story is coming from a 17 year old girl but it doesn't sound like it. It sounds like it's being dictated. Not narrated. Now my question is do you know the difference lol.
Jul 05, 2021 02:30AM
Make Me (Make or Break, #1)

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Angel
Angel is 80% done
I think I'm finally understanding this book a little bit better. I have to say, douche canoe, epic. It reads as if the girl is writing in her diary. You know how we say dear diary, and then we basically dump our souls. As though someone is actually reading it? That's what it feels like.

Trust me when I say this book is not without its errors. Spelling, grammar, just a bunch of things I would fix.
Jul 06, 2021 07:46AM
Make Me (Make or Break, #1)


Angel
Angel is 53% done
LMFAO the author has just won my heart. She used a saying that I use almost daily in conversation. Especially when I'm pissed off. Douche canoe. Way to go amanda. I love that saying. That's slang. Now that I've been able to rewire my brain back to before I was able to process some emotions, I am able to understand the writing a little bit better. But holy God my face lit up when I saw that slang.
Jul 05, 2021 01:23PM
Make Me (Make or Break, #1)


Angel
Angel is 50% done
First I'd like to note, I'm guessing where I am in the book because for some reason Goodreads is not picking up the page count. I'm only on page 45 lol.

That being said I have just hit chapter 5 and the opening line is, "the thing about me is, I don't process things like I should". Bingo! now we understand why there's no reflection.
Jul 05, 2021 12:36PM
Make Me (Make or Break, #1)


Angel
Angel is 45% done
I really want to like this story. However to me it feels like the narrator is not a narrator. But it dictator. Even they are not feeling their story. There is no emotion. There's no connection. As you all know I have already committed to reading it, so I will read it to the end. Stay tuned
Jul 05, 2021 09:43AM
Make Me (Make or Break, #1)


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