Teri’s Reviews > Rock Heaven > Status Update

Free on iBooks & Kindle Unlimited. Premise is good, but she needs an editor - badly. It's like her English teachers never told her it was a bad idea to use passive tense, or English isn't her first language - a lot of the sentences seem as if they were written by someone who learnt English from Yoda... The amount of similies is ridiculous - "as a" or "like a", appear about every 3rd-4th line.