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John Walker
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Some of this just isnt working.
I detest how the story is being told to us. This back and forth with the present day "history keeper" who keeps reminding him "tell the story like to a child"
AKA us the reader, how creative/s.
But then it time skips which goes against the point of this story telling device.
and there's barely vampires!
and the MC is really unlikable!
— Oct 05, 2021 08:27AM
I detest how the story is being told to us. This back and forth with the present day "history keeper" who keeps reminding him "tell the story like to a child"
AKA us the reader, how creative/s.
But then it time skips which goes against the point of this story telling device.
and there's barely vampires!
and the MC is really unlikable!
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John Walker
is 99% done
The ending twist....so this is the Last of Us but with Vampires.
— Oct 25, 2021 07:33AM
John Walker
is 99% done
Wow you had to kill not one, but two horses. And what you did the second time was just unnecessary.
Ill give star wars fans a hint. Taun Tauns.
— Oct 24, 2021 04:27PM
Ill give star wars fans a hint. Taun Tauns.
John Walker
is 80% done
When you're not that interested so you're procrastinating by reading reviews about what everyone else liked and disliked trying to figure out where you fall...
— Oct 19, 2021 09:30AM
John Walker
is on page 100 of 739
Ok, YES, in hindsight the description does make this clear. BUT I cant believe this is one of those "Let me sit down and tell you my story."
Can good books still come out of this? Yes, but Im so tired of this trope.
Just write the damn story in 1st person from the beginning.
smh.
— Oct 04, 2021 12:26AM
Can good books still come out of this? Yes, but Im so tired of this trope.
Just write the damn story in 1st person from the beginning.
smh.
