Miranda Davis’s Reviews > The Last Hour of Gann > Status Update
Miranda Davis
is 82% done
Amber sexes up her captor/rapist then fights back. Meoraq goes medieval on raiders asses in a black rage. Things were picking up.
But then S'kot's back, still a shit. Nicci's been all used up, still selfish. The hero's trying to keep a lid on his lust; Amber wants yet another "what're you thinking talk." Too much repetition, too much repetition, too much repitition.
— Apr 18, 2014 05:15PM
But then S'kot's back, still a shit. Nicci's been all used up, still selfish. The hero's trying to keep a lid on his lust; Amber wants yet another "what're you thinking talk." Too much repetition, too much repetition, too much repitition.
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Miranda Davis
is 75% done
The bad lizard reminds me of Javier Bardem in Skyfall...just sayin' twisty. Evil lizard has the baggage of an altar boy diddled by the parish priest, and an iffy temper. Wish Nicci were there to take the abuse instead...
— Mar 19, 2014 09:49PM
Miranda Davis
is 75% done
The bad lizard reminds me of Javier Bardem in Skyfall...just sayin' twisty.
— Mar 19, 2014 09:48PM
Miranda Davis
is 75% done
So a real bad baddie, the head raider, has her. He's got with the baggage of an altar boy diddled by the parish priest and an iffy temperament. Meoraq's in pursuit but will he make it before her snotty attitude gets her fucked to death by the raiders? Why am I wondering if the other earthlings are dead or not? I wish Nicci could be taking the lumps for once...
— Mar 19, 2014 09:47PM
Miranda Davis
is 59% done
And now we are rockin' and rollin' along. Having a wonderful time reading this.
— Mar 03, 2014 06:34PM
Miranda Davis
is 54% done
Why do I love Amber? "Rub-a-dub-dub, thanks forthe grub. Yay, god."
— Mar 03, 2014 05:41PM
Miranda Davis
is 49% done
HOLY MOLEY! (Sound of jaw dropping, clunk!) I can't believe what just happened to AMBER. And I really can't wait to find out what Scott's fate will be at Meoraq's hands (I hope).
— Mar 03, 2014 04:28PM
Miranda Davis
is 47% done
Finally, more Meoraq. I stopped just as he was telling the campers a story from his youth. Amber finally bitch slapped Nicci, figuratively, to pull her own weight, then felt bad for it yet again. There's too much repetition making the same point. Nicci's a whining bitch user, Scott's a delusional whining loser. Amber's prickly. Got it, move on...please.
— Mar 01, 2014 10:39PM
Miranda Davis
is 32% done
Amber's learning survival skills, yay! Meoraq is so choice, YAY! and sigh. Scott's been bitch-slapped by the leading lizard, love that. Nicci needs to be. I wish it'd move a bit faster.
— Feb 22, 2014 09:13PM
Miranda Davis
is 20% done
I'm savoring this story, it's like watching an epic unwind. They've met! They're trying to communicate and it's wonderfully well imagined. Great! Wow. Just wow.
— Feb 09, 2014 09:46PM
Miranda Davis
is 14% done
I've read enough to detest Scott and wish Amber would snitch one of the painkiller pen hypodermic thingys and stab him with an overdose and be done with him. Turdling. Lord of the Flies, Animal Farm all allude to the whole might is right, most are sheep way we behave...foreshadowing unpleasantness. Nicci still sniveling.
Want to return to Lizardland fast! Meoraq, where are you?
— Jan 21, 2014 06:11PM
Want to return to Lizardland fast! Meoraq, where are you?
