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I despise how every chapter seems to start, "for x amount of time I've done this". Can we at least be there when you're doing some of these things? It could have been a paragraph, but it's a sentence in past tense and we're supposed to connect to what's going on?

Remember to read your TWs people, no book is worth your mental health.

The situation the MC is in is heartbreaking but more word vomit, I can't do that now. This whole story is mainly word vomit.

Part 2,
Knew things were going downhill at this point. We are downhill at this point, I repeat downhill has been reached.

Not everything needs to be spelled out, ugh.

"That chair must be made from marine-grade polymer"
"...and use your fine motor skills for eighteen hours straight."
Umm who is this woman? Definitely doesn't feel real whatsoever.

Okay the writing style isn't great, but it's entertaining. I see the appeal now.

It's painful reading this, not because of the set up so far, but because the writing style is just grating.