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The situation the MC is in is heartbreaking but more word vomit, I can't do that now. This whole story is mainly word vomit.
— Dec 23, 2021 04:21AM
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Stars
is on page 356 of 386
I despise how every chapter seems to start, "for x amount of time I've done this". Can we at least be there when you're doing some of these things? It could have been a paragraph, but it's a sentence in past tense and we're supposed to connect to what's going on?
— Dec 23, 2021 09:28AM
Stars
is on page 304 of 386
Remember to read your TWs people, no book is worth your mental health.
— Dec 23, 2021 04:57AM
Stars
is on page 234 of 386
Part 2,
Knew things were going downhill at this point. We are downhill at this point, I repeat downhill has been reached.
— Dec 23, 2021 12:28AM
Knew things were going downhill at this point. We are downhill at this point, I repeat downhill has been reached.
Stars
is on page 125 of 386
"That chair must be made from marine-grade polymer"
"...and use your fine motor skills for eighteen hours straight."
Umm who is this woman? Definitely doesn't feel real whatsoever.
— Dec 22, 2021 06:28AM
"...and use your fine motor skills for eighteen hours straight."
Umm who is this woman? Definitely doesn't feel real whatsoever.
Stars
is on page 84 of 386
Okay the writing style isn't great, but it's entertaining. I see the appeal now.
— Dec 22, 2021 01:36AM
Stars
is on page 20 of 386
It's painful reading this, not because of the set up so far, but because the writing style is just grating.
— Dec 21, 2021 08:59AM
