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Loren
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James entered the story and it’s MUCH better quite suddenly
— Dec 24, 2021 02:41PM
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Loren
is on page 193 of 464
IT WOULD BE SO GOOD IF IT WASN’T SO RUSHED!!!! PACAT I KNOW YOU’RE A GOOD AUTHOR WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS
— Dec 19, 2021 07:07PM
Loren
is on page 193 of 464
almost halfway through and I’m frustrated because how did someone who is so good at characterization and world building produce such a shoddy introduction. Everything moved too quickly and felt so fake and orchestrated. The worst is Violet, who changed her whole value system over the course of 40 pages. ugh.
— Dec 19, 2021 07:06PM
