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Night
is 49% done
Why is Shame always such a mega-douche? He does shitty stuff to Mace and then blames her for reacting to it like a human being. I can't believe I am even still reading this mess. Actually at this point, I'm kind of just skimming through all the long boring internal dialogue. Man, this mess needed an editor in the worst way!
— Jun 09, 2014 10:31AM
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Night
is 33% done
Let me get this straight...a CLIT piercing seemed less painful than nipple piercings? Thafuck!!?
— Jun 09, 2014 08:20AM
Night
is 5% done
Never-ending back story and paragraphs of dialogue without a pause. Are you kissing me?
— Jun 09, 2014 06:15AM
