Henry Lee’s Reviews > Hedging His Bets > Status Update

The first four chapters were at least a bit entertaining, with all the so-bad-it's-almost-good writing. But after the attempted rape (and the writers' handwaving it off as 'seduction') it's gone rapidly downhill. I guess they just wanted to get this mess over with in a hurry.

"Not with him seducing her while she slept..."

Uhm, I'm no lawyer, but I'm pretty damn sure that's called rape.

"She couldn't wait for him to move on, shift from kisses to caresses and fuck-esses..."

Wow, subtle writing there!

The date is off! The writers really know how to resolve any building tension in an expedient manner.

Aaand -- it's a pissing contest. Literally!

So hedge-Blake has been anally violated with a thermometer, sexually assaulted by Honey's three female normal hedgehogs, and now he has to put up with dr. Caleb Pearson, the very same man who is threatening to perma-cockblock Blake? I can feel a storm coming!

Honey and dr. Pearson have a date. They have a date. THEY HAVE A DATE! Blake ain't gonna be none too happy about this!

I'm guessing Honey's adopting hedge-Blake? What could possibly go wrong?

"[...]heading home for another date with Pam the Palm and her five little friends." Okay, I'll admit that got a laugh out of me.

"She was running away from him again, always running." Yeah, this sounds like a match made in heaven! Or stalker-ish behavior.