Ayanami Faerudo’s Reviews > Ghost Moon Night > Status Update
Ayanami Faerudo
is 17% done
Hmmmm,nice intro but too much horror-creature exposition in the first few chapters.
— Oct 27, 2014 04:13AM
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Ayanami Faerudo
is 80% done
The term flip-flops has been used only since 1972. I know other things have happened in the story but the term just don't jive well with the story and has been bothering every time it was mentioned. Maybe tsinelas> will fit better.
— Oct 29, 2014 10:04AM
Ayanami Faerudo
is 17% done
Then again, the focus is not on the tiyanak and the nuno sa punso but on the langbuan and the curse. We'll see how it goes.
— Oct 27, 2014 04:14AM
