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Abbie
is 77% done
One thing I don’t like about this book is that there’s no setup for certain things that happen. Like one moment Kamal is on the phone with Jayda miles from her home and the next moment she’s suddenly there with no explanation. The lack of transitions is sloppy.
— Sep 05, 2022 06:47AM
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Abbie
is 99% done
This just turned into nonsense. It honestly made no sense for Jayda to go back to LA just because she broke up with Kamal. None of the later portion of this book was entertaining. It irked my soul how poorly written scene transitions were. And it was even more annoying how contradictory information kept popping up. Just a 3 for me.
— Sep 05, 2022 07:52AM
Abbie
is 84% done
This book just turned terrible. It just feels like I’m reading a bunch of scenes just thrown together. She really needs to work on her transition game.
— Sep 05, 2022 07:16AM
