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This just turned into nonsense. It honestly made no sense for Jayda to go back to LA just because she broke up with Kamal. None of the later portion of this book was entertaining. It irked my soul how poorly written scene transitions were. And it was even more annoying how contradictory information kept popping up. Just a 3 for me.

One thing I don’t like about this book is that there’s no setup for certain things that happen. Like one moment Kamal is on the phone with Jayda miles from her home and the next moment she’s suddenly there with no explanation. The lack of transitions is sloppy.