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Martin
is 54% done
“If Kimo hadn’t told me you were a mahu, I would never have guessed it. You don’t act gay at all.”
I didn’t know how to respond to that. “Well, I am,” was the best answer I could supply.
“He says you’re in love with some man you can’t have. That you’re a mess in your relationships. You need to choose more wisely, I think he said.”
“Kimo…said that?” Why was he even talking to her about me?
OMG... how uncomfortable
— Oct 18, 2022 09:04PM
I didn’t know how to respond to that. “Well, I am,” was the best answer I could supply.
“He says you’re in love with some man you can’t have. That you’re a mess in your relationships. You need to choose more wisely, I think he said.”
“Kimo…said that?” Why was he even talking to her about me?
OMG... how uncomfortable
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Martin
is 63% done
Now they have a threesome with the wife?! That's it. I'm gone.
— Oct 20, 2022 09:02PM
Martin
is 62% done
I sucked on his beautiful manhood underwater and let his beautiful balls hit me in the chin as I took every last inch of him in my grateful, suck-happy mouth.
This book is getting worse and worse!! Their sex is like a parody.
— Oct 20, 2022 08:53PM
This book is getting worse and worse!! Their sex is like a parody.
Martin
is 55% done
Bobby has a self-destructive streak. Every time a man he loves let's him down, he runs to the other man who constantly disappoints him. He's switching back and forth between two negative poles....
— Oct 18, 2022 09:09PM
Martin
is 44% done
There were candles to light, flowers and incense, even a package of condoms.
LOL, not that you guys wasted a single thought on STDs before....
— Oct 17, 2022 09:22AM
LOL, not that you guys wasted a single thought on STDs before....
Martin
is 41% done
“I love that you just did that. My wife wouldn’t even have figured out to do that. We would have spent ten minutes arguing about it.”
“Your wife should never be mentioned when you’re on a date with your other wife.”
OMG, they pretty much summed up nicely what is wrong with this story, LOL.
— Oct 16, 2022 09:14PM
“Your wife should never be mentioned when you’re on a date with your other wife.”
OMG, they pretty much summed up nicely what is wrong with this story, LOL.
Martin
is 41% done
This story has an amazing sense of place. I feel like I'm in Hawaii reading this. The romance/affair/whatever, though, is super super weird....I totally cannot read our married hula stud Kimo whose hot and cold demeanor confuses Bobby just as it confuses me...
— Oct 16, 2022 09:06PM
Martin
is 32% done
“I know there’s a woman,” she kept saying. “I know you’re seeing someone.”
“What makes you think that?” I heard him shout back.
“Because you’ve quit being a horrible jerk to me!”
They must have a beautiful marriage....
— Oct 16, 2022 12:30PM
“What makes you think that?” I heard him shout back.
“Because you’ve quit being a horrible jerk to me!”
They must have a beautiful marriage....
Martin
is 20% done
You know what brought me here? The YouTube algorithm.
It threw a hula dance video in my feed with an insanely hot male dancer and I just had to find a gay love story with such a character.
And of course I found one on goodreads and it is actually pretty steamy. I love it so far :-)
— Oct 16, 2022 04:18AM
It threw a hula dance video in my feed with an insanely hot male dancer and I just had to find a gay love story with such a character.
And of course I found one on goodreads and it is actually pretty steamy. I love it so far :-)
