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The POV of my book is first person. I know this because Charlie, the main character always says "I" "me" or "my".
Sentence one: "My eyes darted from tree to rock to creek to fern while I scrambled to figure out what to say next"
Sentence 2: "I wasn't sure that I had fixed my mistake, but at least I had tried."
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