Alyssa’s Reviews > Captured Sunlight > Status Update
Alyssa
is 14% done
This book really isn’t written well. Everything is told instead of shown, the characters’ motivations are not believable at all, and there are typos all over the place (misspellings, using the incorrect word, verb tense mixups, etc.). The MC keeps being like, “I’m so attracted to him, but no! Stop that, me! He’s my enemy!” from their first meeting Ughhh, no character development
— Dec 21, 2022 07:19PM
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Alyssa
is 15% done
Sentence structure is all over the place, too. Trying not to DNF but it’s really not holding my interest— mostly because of how surface-level and obvious it is, with no character development.
— Dec 21, 2022 07:21PM
