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Belle
is 20% done
Too much telling, not enough showing. Definitely a distinct lack of descriptions in this book (so far). I appreciate the need to continue driving an “action” story forward, but.. I would have liked to have seen the settings a bit more.
Main character is not particularly likeable. Will shelf this book for a while and maybe come back to it later.
Shame because the premise was good.
— Feb 06, 2023 10:06AM
Main character is not particularly likeable. Will shelf this book for a while and maybe come back to it later.
Shame because the premise was good.
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