January’s Reviews > The Johnson Sisters > Status Update
January
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10:15 Ch. 2 Phoenix - They have 5 sisters in the blurb, then MC says she 5 sisters but, "3 girls in one bedroom and 2 in the other," (Where did the 6th child sleep?), finally they name her 5 sisters saying Renée, the second sister died at 16. Sloppy writing out of the gate is not a way to start off the story. I'm going to try to ignore it.
— Mar 12, 2023 02:10PM
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January
is 9% done
54:50 Ch. 4 - I knew I shouldn't have wasted my time finishing this chapter. It's beyond clear that someone doesn't write what they know. I've never heard of an hour-long selling anything party; the snacks and product demonstration take longer than that. 7 inches is not considered big for that product or in general; women don't talk like this! If you invite your questionable friend to a party after they did that to y
— Mar 20, 2023 12:46AM
January
is 5% done
34:18 4 minutes into Ch. 3 - I know they are not going to spend another minute talking about deep-throating bananas. Is there any story here or is it just a series of filler scenes?
— Mar 17, 2023 09:38PM
January
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30:35 Ch. 3 - I feel like I read this book before, but after pursuing my mind I think it was Miss Pearly's Girls and just the party scene. I have made a connection but I'm going to put a pin 📌 in it and decide next week.
— Mar 15, 2023 05:51AM
