Abi’s Reviews > Flame in the Mist > Status Update

I'm struggling through this. I thought it would be much more interesting, but there's waaay too much description in here and not enough action. I keep waiting for something to happen only to get more description. Even the action scenes have tons of unneeded descriptions. This leads to scenes that could be a couple paragraphs, maybe even a page or so, into multiple pages of just nothing. It takes you out of the scene.