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I'm struggling through this. I thought it would be much more interesting, but there's waaay too much description in here and not enough action. I keep waiting for something to happen only to get more description. Even the action scenes have tons of unneeded descriptions. This leads to scenes that could be a couple paragraphs, maybe even a page or so, into multiple pages of just nothing. It takes you out of the scene.
— May 20, 2023 11:34PM
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Abi
is on page 183 of 402
So juch telling of how smart Mariko is and not much showing. I don't find her to be that intelligent, not that she's stupid either. She just doesn't do anything particularly amazing.
It's at least gotten a little better. Not as unbearable as the start was.
— Jul 16, 2023 09:03PM
It's at least gotten a little better. Not as unbearable as the start was.
