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is 28% done
I am honestly considering not finishing this book. Plot is okay, but too many details. I do not need to know every time the dog does his business. This is a novel not a daily journal. Also the lack of editing. UGH! "The taste of the juice was most definitely than the taste of the coffee." Most definitely WHAT? Just an example. The plot has such possibilites.
— Apr 24, 2015 01:48PM
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Deanna
is 28% done
I am honestly considering not finishing this book. Plot is okay, but too many details. I do not need to know every time the dog does his business. This is a novel not a daily journal. Also the lack of editing. UGH! "The taste of the juice was most definitely than the taste of the coffee." Most definitely WHAT? Just an example. The plot has such possibilites.
— Apr 24, 2015 01:49PM
