NicoleR.M.M.’s Reviews > Wild Horses > Status Update
NicoleR.M.M.
is 41% done
This is the second book in a short time that has dialogues as if these men are incapable of speaking in true, whole sentences. Lots of ‘….’ and ‘uhm’s’ and breaking off when they tell something. I hope it’s not a new trend because I find it annoying. AND HONEST, REAL LIFE DIALOGUES CAN MAKE OR BREAK A STORY!
— Jun 12, 2023 01:26AM
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NicoleR.M.M.
is 20% done
Going at a turtle’s pace - it’s a charming story all right, but maybe a little too much telling and not showing? It makes it harder to feel the connection between Kit and Mick.
— Jun 10, 2023 06:45PM
