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Jacki Tananis
is 36% done
Likely a DNF for me. The writing style is not my type.
—3rd person pov laid out as a dual pov
—overexplains simple circumstances
—character thinks an emotion and then speaks it making things repetitive
— Jun 30, 2023 07:24AM
—3rd person pov laid out as a dual pov
—overexplains simple circumstances
—character thinks an emotion and then speaks it making things repetitive
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