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is 40% done
A lot of internal monolog and info dumps, but mostly fun and exciting.
Some of the world building details are possibly too complex, it seems like a combination of foreshadowing and setting up context for future stories that the author will probably just over-explain when it comes up again.
Good character development.
— Jul 02, 2023 02:55PM
Some of the world building details are possibly too complex, it seems like a combination of foreshadowing and setting up context for future stories that the author will probably just over-explain when it comes up again.
Good character development.
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is 15% done
Lightyears better plot and writing compared to the author’s YA series. The the subtly informal language balances the formality of the high fantasy style and brings a bit of humanity.
— Jun 30, 2023 01:51PM
