Jacqueline J’s Reviews > The Goblin General > Status Update

So boring. Just read a brief flash of action, told after it happened. About a paragraph and a half. then back to knitting and crochet. I do knit and crochet but it is boring as hell to read about

Interesting premise. Writing so so. Author doesn’t seem to understand what a bastard is. And how the devil did she write this sentence? “The princess’s jaw sagged with fear. She swallowed hard and hastily fixed the necklace on her stiff sister’s neck.” Is there another sister who is floppy? Because that’s the only way this sentence is acceptable in English.