HMS’s Reviews > Something Wicked > Status Update
HMS
is 37% done
After a waiter asks the H/h if they are ready to order and the reply is they need a minute. The next sentence is "Nodding, the waited (waiter?????) disappeared being the swinging metal door." Wow, existential!!!! I am mot trying to be bitchy and picky but the editing thus far is terrible!
— Jun 01, 2015 11:58AM
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HMS
is 19% done
The minor editorial issues are driving me crazy, "were" instead of "was," "A" instead of "I," "her" instead of "here" Distracting, to say the least. Heroine isn't very impressive at this point either.
— Jun 01, 2015 09:23AM
