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Shelbie
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The plot is getting better but the grammar is horrendous. I’m some parts Graces name is not even capitalized. Pronouns are getting jumbled etc
— Jul 23, 2023 07:43PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil

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Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 279 of 306
Not be reading anymore books by her.
— Aug 01, 2023 07:23PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 279 of 306
Wants one thing in return after they escape. To kill Grace because she is too powerful. But never mentions why she is powerful.

This book was not very interesting. The plot, details, and character development were sorely lacking. Also felt a little out of order at times and some things mentioned but never touched upon again. Maybe once this author gets more work under her felt she will do better but as of now I will
— Aug 01, 2023 07:22PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 279 of 306
Eli and Grace finally kiss and the two of them plus his sister closed the portal between the two sides so everyone is equal. There was a brief mention of how Grace is very powerful yet that was not touched on again which seems like a wasted aspect or should have been brought up sooner. The epilogue was weird… Samuel is alive in the portal along with Graces mother. The two are trying to escape and Graces mother
— Aug 01, 2023 07:21PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 266 of 306
Incomplete sentences that just end have made an appearance. The plot of this books is horrible but the grammar makes it absolutely awful to read.

The devil was put into an interdenominational portal so he would be far from everyone. The whole fight sense was pretty jumpy and hard to follow but the conclusion is the devil was taken care of and the 3 are talking about reopening the portals between worlds
— Jul 31, 2023 07:22PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 244 of 306
So now Grace has powers? No idea how she got them or why she has them but she can slow time down. God died by Samuels hand.
Here’s the thing this book is a 1.5/10 if the author was more established the story would be great but the grammar is so horrible that I just can’t wait to be done reading this book. On the other hand this was her first work but it didn’t even seem like she proof read before publishing
— Jul 30, 2023 07:36PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 219 of 306
I trust me dad I don’t trust my dad. There is so much back and forth without any sort of reason or support. This book is really not great the grammar is horrible, wrong words are used and the communication between characters is not good. I understand this is the first book this author wrote but come on there needs to be better everything
— Jul 29, 2023 08:40PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 219 of 306
“Nah - I’m just messing with you” satan this is COMICAL in a bad way
— Jul 29, 2023 08:39PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 197 of 306
Soo apparently Graces mom died when she was very young from going through the portal. Which is when God and the Devil decided to shut the portal doors for good. The grammar still sucks ass truly
— Jul 28, 2023 08:37PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 172 of 306
Captivity and that is when Eli walked into the the room with Graces father who they thought was dead
— Jul 27, 2023 07:41PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


Shelbie
Shelbie is on page 172 of 306
Graces dad died? His wings were cut off. Eli took the key and hid it before coming back to the area where he stood by his dads side and his sister and Grace were in the opposite side. It appeared that Eli turned on them, since he tied them up and left after Grace was stabbed by an angel blade. However after a while her wound from the blade somehow got better and healed. Grace and Elvira were trying to get out of
— Jul 27, 2023 07:40PM
Realm Of Light: A retelling of the classic story of Good vs Evil


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