Tristan’s Reviews > If You Dare > Status Update

Entirely TOO much talking between the two of them and too much overexplaining everything that the characters are thinking. The fact that they're always talking in circles is super annoying. And the author voice needs so much work. I feel like I'm reading fanfiction a lot of the time. And I don't think the author knows much about kink or dominants/submissives at all. Which makes this hard to stomach 95% of the time.