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is 52% done
This back and forth between first and third person narrative is staring to annoy me. I can tell it’s done on purpose but the storytelling feels so choppy. Plus I just read a chapter with four different PoVs in it – it was weird.
I’ll keep reading, though – still interested to see what will happen with the main characters.
— Jun 19, 2015 01:36AM
I’ll keep reading, though – still interested to see what will happen with the main characters.
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