Brenna’s Reviews > Fourth Wing > Status Update
Brenna
is 12% done
The writing is sooooo bad. There have already been 2 "for the win"s and a "What. The. Hell." How tf did this get published?
— Sep 07, 2023 07:54AM
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Brenna
is 74% done
Smut gives me secondhand embarrassment. Dirty talk makes me cringe so much.
I also don't think after I've killed someone for the first time and then be ~in the mood~
But I guess I'm just not like other girls or whatever
The more I talk about how much smut makes me cringe, the more self conscious I get lol.
— Sep 16, 2023 08:18PM
I also don't think after I've killed someone for the first time and then be ~in the mood~
But I guess I'm just not like other girls or whatever
The more I talk about how much smut makes me cringe, the more self conscious I get lol.
Brenna
is 50% done
The writing is still atrocious...like, soooooo bad. But tbh I'm really enjoying the dragons and the magic and the plot moves along at a great pace.
Oh, and the romance (which hasn't happened yet but I know is gonna happen) is super cringey...I think just because it's first person and she's super horny for him at the stupidest times...and she reads like a 15 year old, not a 20 year old.
— Sep 10, 2023 01:48PM
Oh, and the romance (which hasn't happened yet but I know is gonna happen) is super cringey...I think just because it's first person and she's super horny for him at the stupidest times...and she reads like a 15 year old, not a 20 year old.
