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Starlight
is 3% done
Okay so barely a few pages in & honestly, it’s not terrible writing so far. The story didn’t linger or drag on at the start with her problems, which I appreciated.
I stopped right before she went back to her laptop to look at the lotto numbers though,
I swear, if that weird delay of the lotto announcement later turns out to be bc of some magic/fate BS I’ll be so mad. ESP on the fmcs’ behalf. & just in general
— Oct 19, 2023 12:33PM
I stopped right before she went back to her laptop to look at the lotto numbers though,
I swear, if that weird delay of the lotto announcement later turns out to be bc of some magic/fate BS I’ll be so mad. ESP on the fmcs’ behalf. & just in general
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Starlight
is 91% done
..
My god I could die of old age
Or my eyes rolling so much I go blind
Just trying to rant about this shitty mess like I need to
Ugh
If this isn’t a complete trilogy rn I’ll… idk what
I’ll live. And imagine everyone dies horribly anyways
I’m annoyed enough I’ll be adding this to my shit list shelf though
— Oct 19, 2023 07:22PM
My god I could die of old age
Or my eyes rolling so much I go blind
Just trying to rant about this shitty mess like I need to
Ugh
If this isn’t a complete trilogy rn I’ll… idk what
I’ll live. And imagine everyone dies horribly anyways
I’m annoyed enough I’ll be adding this to my shit list shelf though
Starlight
is 90% done
Really it just kept getting worse and worse
On top of these poorly written characters and their annoying cliche tropey dialogues
The diarrhea icing on a pooptastic cake was the baby talking authors note at the end of a shitty cliffhanger
Ugh
And yet I want to know what happens to these dipshits
..
— Oct 19, 2023 07:20PM
On top of these poorly written characters and their annoying cliche tropey dialogues
The diarrhea icing on a pooptastic cake was the baby talking authors note at the end of a shitty cliffhanger
Ugh
And yet I want to know what happens to these dipshits
..
Starlight
is 57% done
Ugh
So much to rant on
But I wont bc I’m speed reading this shit rn to get it over with
Now I’m even contemplating putting this book into my “utter shit” shelf, where the dumpster fire is..
— Oct 19, 2023 05:29PM
So much to rant on
But I wont bc I’m speed reading this shit rn to get it over with
Now I’m even contemplating putting this book into my “utter shit” shelf, where the dumpster fire is..
Starlight
is 34% done
Meh?
This is a weird one
The writing style and direction the story is going is meh and not really my cup.. also I got confused Melissa and this Miranda that just popped up. Couldn’t have chosen a diff name??? Also the name of the fmc being the title or whatever
I’m barely interested in these characters ugh
Idc
— Oct 19, 2023 04:03PM
This is a weird one
The writing style and direction the story is going is meh and not really my cup.. also I got confused Melissa and this Miranda that just popped up. Couldn’t have chosen a diff name??? Also the name of the fmc being the title or whatever
I’m barely interested in these characters ugh
Idc
Starlight
is 10% done
Okay now it’s starting to drag
Ugh
And they’re just going around house hunting rn
Yawn
Also the inner monologues of this first guy
I need to reread the blurb. This is getting boring quick
— Oct 19, 2023 12:51PM
Ugh
And they’re just going around house hunting rn
Yawn
Also the inner monologues of this first guy
I need to reread the blurb. This is getting boring quick
Starlight
is 2% done
Coming off from rereading one of my most read books; adorn by JL.
I added a few new to my current reads when I started the reread, and only now getting to them.
The blurbs were interesting enough
But…..I don’t have any high hopes or expectations for them being good. 🙏 I’m wrong though. Hopefully there’s a gem or two.
— Oct 19, 2023 12:27PM
I added a few new to my current reads when I started the reread, and only now getting to them.
The blurbs were interesting enough
But…..I don’t have any high hopes or expectations for them being good. 🙏 I’m wrong though. Hopefully there’s a gem or two.