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Really it just kept getting worse and worse

On top of these poorly written characters and their annoying cliche tropey dialogues

The diarrhea icing on a pooptastic cake was the baby talking authors note at the end of a shitty cliffhanger

Ugh

And yet I want to know what happens to these dipshits

..

Ugh

So much to rant on

But I wont bc I’m speed reading this shit rn to get it over with

Now I’m even contemplating putting this book into my “utter shit” shelf, where the dumpster fire is..

Ugh… the writing is just getting shittier and shittier

Oh yeah

The dirty talking and sex scenes are shit.

Ugh

Meh?

This is a weird one

The writing style and direction the story is going is meh and not really my cup.. also I got confused Melissa and this Miranda that just popped up. Couldn’t have chosen a diff name??? Also the name of the fmc being the title or whatever

I’m barely interested in these characters ugh
Idc

Okay now it’s starting to drag
Ugh

And they’re just going around house hunting rn

Yawn

Also the inner monologues of this first guy

I need to reread the blurb. This is getting boring quick

Okay so barely a few pages in & honestly, it’s not terrible writing so far. The story didn’t linger or drag on at the start with her problems, which I appreciated.

I stopped right before she went back to her laptop to look at the lotto numbers though,

I swear, if that weird delay of the lotto announcement later turns out to be bc of some magic/fate BS I’ll be so mad. ESP on the fmcs’ behalf. & just in general

Coming off from rereading one of my most read books; adorn by JL.

I added a few new to my current reads when I started the reread, and only now getting to them.

The blurbs were interesting enough

But…..I don’t have any high hopes or expectations for them being good. 🙏 I’m wrong though. Hopefully there’s a gem or two.