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"...female peach."

Yeah... I'm actually at the point I want to dnf? But it's almost done!

*sigh*

If there is something like a nether flower, what can be considered an upper flower?

Nevermind i don't really want to know. After i finish this book i will need some ice for my forehead...

*facepalm*

'Flower'? That better not be what I think it is because the only time i accept that euphemism is in old harlequin novels.!

... so no orgasm for you then?

*sigh* and this is why I think this is very much written for men. Which I don't always have a problem with, except when the people we follow are women, who also lust after women but apparently only care about penises and everything ends the second the man orgasms.

Yeah Hanneah, you can't be serious. Offering your friend up for some mouth action for a deal you negotiated doesn't sound like a good time to me...

I truly can't imagine why some people find this erotic. Or does it get overlooked because your focus is on the smutty scenes that follow?

That’s right,” Hannaeh mewled in encouragement. “I’m your slut, I’m your little elven slut! Use me like I'm a toy. I’m a piece of meat for you nasty, savage bastards to abuse!”

“Fuck, what a whore!”

~ Yeah, I'm not enjoying this. This just make me roll my eyes. It's not sexy and in fact feels a bit juvenile?

Also personal pet peev:e if someone doesn't get paid, don't use the word whore.

I would be more disgusted by the fact the dude has a wife? Plus he was injured so this feels a bit rapey? Who gives a fart about how lovely the elf is?! You are a healer!

Sjees, I am using my critical skills for erotica.

Ugh random choking... not a fan. I really don't get why people think it's sexy in what I assume is a casual encounter.

Who is highlighting this passage and why?

"The fucking was brutal; the human laid into her cunt like a warg mating a breeding-bitch in the kennels back in her village."

This is why i don't like reading with the kindle app. I should've converted this in calibre...

I need to know why that passage is highlight worthy.