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Kenna
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"I'm starting to think my first guess about them is right. With that kind of fierce loyalty, they have to be lovers.
I am not jealous. Nope. That pit of ugliness spreading inside my chest isn't jealousy. It can't be"
Not only is this quote cringe as hell, but it's a consistent problem I'm seeing within this book and most books nowadays. I saw someone call it a "tell not show" thing in books and that's exactly right.
— Dec 05, 2023 11:21AM
I am not jealous. Nope. That pit of ugliness spreading inside my chest isn't jealousy. It can't be"
Not only is this quote cringe as hell, but it's a consistent problem I'm seeing within this book and most books nowadays. I saw someone call it a "tell not show" thing in books and that's exactly right.
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Kenna
is on page 300 of 517
this is the embarrassing couple that makes out in the hall
— Dec 08, 2023 12:39PM
Kenna
is on page 228 of 517
it really do be the insta lust that all y’all are pretending is enemies to lovers. PUH-lease. i’m never trusting booktok EVER again
— Dec 06, 2023 12:22PM
Kenna
is on page 227 of 517
flashes of pain? hints of panic? raw hunger? there’s no fucking way someone can tell that specific of emotions on someone else’s face.
just another dumbass ‘tell not show’ example 🙄
— Dec 06, 2023 07:49AM
just another dumbass ‘tell not show’ example 🙄
Kenna
is on page 217 of 517
You know what, props to Rebecca Yarros because Dain is probably the most layered and complex character in this book but that does say something very negative about the rest of her characters
— Dec 05, 2023 11:17AM
