Dalidja’s Reviews > Pack Deception: Part Two > Status Update
Dalidja
is finished
The first half of this was super mediocre, but the second half really picked up the slack. The author needs an editor that will catch her using incorrect words though. Numerous times she says junction instead of juncture, and so many others. Including saying "case and point" instead of "case in point." It feels like we need another book to delve more into Ava, Wells, and some of the other characters that stood out.
— Dec 18, 2023 01:55AM
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