Jennifer’s Reviews > The Academy, Book One > Status Update

Dang, this book is gruesome. Still finding annoying spelling errors too.

"Every surface was surface." ...I can't even. What?

"barred"..."bared"

"alter"..."altar"
"infarction"..."infraction"
"sight..."site"
Sigh..I'm catching at least 3 spelling or just wrong word usage errors per percent. WTF.

Did you seriously just use a noun as an adjective? Who edited this thing?
"He was emaciated, pallor and slumped over..."

"He wretched in another breath of air"...what? Does he mean "wrenched"? maybe?

"he thought that he would parish"
PERISH the thought.

Dude trying to kill the kid. Kid looks out window and sees the killer guy IN HIS YARD. And the author still felt it necessary to tell us that the birds were telling him "something bad" was out there and to run, AFTER the kid looked out the window and saw it for himself? Redundant...

At least the writing is better than the last book I picked up.