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still not a huge fan of the book. but if we are mostly world building in this first one, i can understand it. and besides, it gets progressively better.
— Oct 08, 2015 12:56AM
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Mary
is on page 199 of 515
i think i will have to come back to this. i just don't feel a connection to the book and I'm dragging through.
— Oct 08, 2015 03:51AM
Mary
is on page 65 of 515
the writing does ease up and smooth out after a bit. thank goodness! still hoping for a good hook though.
— Oct 07, 2015 11:18PM
Mary
is on page 36 of 515
this is an incredibly difficult book to get into. i can follow it, yes, but i just don't feel very engaged. the characters are not really fleshed out, and while the writing styles make sense for the characters, they are really abrasive. i really hope it gets better.
— Oct 07, 2015 10:23PM
