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Fan fiction feels of OCs. It's a little slow with it's it's day day dialogue and narrative, not as spicy as I was hoping. I'm glad there's an importance on consent and people feeling ready for intimacy, but it just feels like it drags on a little.
— Jan 30, 2024 08:18PM
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Tobi
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You know the feeling of reading a fanfic? It's that just with original characters. That may not make sense because aren't all fiction novels fanfics about the writers characters? Yes. And no. This has the distinct vibe of reading a fanfic. The setting, the voice, the fluff, the smut. Distinctly fanfiction-y. It just reverberates with that mood.
— Dec 08, 2023 10:13AM
