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The writing isn't good, nor subtile.
The love story is obvious and doesn't mix well into the rest of the book. It's like the editor pointed chapters were something emotional had to be added to please readers but it just feel odd and out of place... it also messes up the rythm.
— Feb 20, 2024 01:19PM
The love story is obvious and doesn't mix well into the rest of the book. It's like the editor pointed chapters were something emotional had to be added to please readers but it just feel odd and out of place... it also messes up the rythm.
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