Cfabrication’s Reviews > Rubicon > Status Update

Viscera are in the abdomen, not the head and neck.

Too talky at the crisis.

Where are all the crewmen? The command staff? The bridge crew?

Can you turn on my little AI friend, please?

She seems to have forgotten this.

A big reveal.

Seems like they have a solution to the problem

Ranks are bit weird.

There’s a Commodore (presumably in charge of the ship, but not a battlegroup.

She’s a Sargent. I think the troops are all Sargents.

The next levels — squad leaders — are I think lieutenants.

That’s an oddly hollowed out structure.

The idea that their home star is going to expand and kill them in a few hundred years is nonsense.

A main sequence star exists for billions of years before it expands into a red giant. That stage takes millions of years.

https://exoplanets.nasa.gov/life-and-....

Getting annoyed now.

West isn’t a character, he’s a plot device, a way of providing exposition.

Plus, after two months, I believe Adrienne would no longer be seeing “his real eye”, “his mechanical hand”. It would just be him.