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Viscera are in the abdomen, not the head and neck.

Too talky at the crisis.

Where are all the crewmen? The command staff? The bridge crew?

A big reveal.

Seems like they have a solution to the problem

What’s with the handwringing? Her arms are injured and bandaged — wouldn’t handwringing hurt?

I don’t think I ever wring my hands.

Ranks are bit weird.

There’s a Commodore (presumably in charge of the ship, but not a battlegroup.

She’s a Sargent. I think the troops are all Sargents.

The next levels — squad leaders — are I think lieutenants.

That’s an oddly hollowed out structure.

The idea that their home star is going to expand and kill them in a few hundred years is nonsense.

A main sequence star exists for billions of years before it expands into a red giant. That stage takes millions of years.

https://exoplanets.nasa.gov/life-and-....

Getting annoyed now.

West isn’t a character, he’s a plot device, a way of providing exposition.

Plus, after two months, I believe Adrienne would no longer be seeing “his real eye”, “his mechanical hand”. It would just be him.