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Starlight
Starlight is 35% done
^even for someone that desperate for money, this fmc bitch just rubs me the wrong fucking way.

It’s clear the authors’ intentions for her to be a “badass boss bitch” fmc, but it fell so far off the track.. like her fucking cocked hip. (And expression and pose has just now become a peeve of mine, BC OF THIS SHIT WRITING)

🤦🏻‍♀️ At this point, all this ranting was stalling before reading again
— Apr 17, 2024 10:03AM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)

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Starlight
Starlight is 30% done
So I chapter page skimmed … all of which seemed repetitive and boring as shit.

The last chapter was, unsurprisingly, shit.

If anything, it just confirmed what a mess this book, this series is.

Utter utter shit. Too many things to rant.

I refuse to let this SHIT ruin my day.

Def at the top spot of my utter shit shelf.

How do I BAN these authors forever??!?
— Apr 17, 2024 10:31AM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)


Starlight
Starlight is 34% done
This bitch has the audacity to break into a home, her literal job was to guard, and then not say anything when she’s caught red handed, AND THEN, have a fucking attitude about it.

Imo, it’s a moot point if her “boss” paid her to do it, that entire scene was so sketchy.

THIS is the fmc I’m supposed to be rooting for?!?? Fuck off
— Apr 17, 2024 09:59AM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)


Starlight
Starlight is 33% done
Admittedly, I didn’t read every damn word so far, so I may be missing most of the context.. but this is such a poorly written mc.

I could forgive most things, but if the MAIN CHARACTER is shit, ON TOP of every other character being shit, 🤦🏻‍♀️
There’s just no hope here.
— Apr 17, 2024 09:55AM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)


Starlight
Starlight is 32% done
Ugh. When you dread reading a book… you know it’s bad.

I hate this fmc. I hate everything about her. And I hate the way she’s written. This bitch has cocked her fucking hip so many times, my mental image of her has become a twisted gnarled branch. I almost said twig, but every fucking character describes her as being big and muscular, but pretty???

The fact that every shit detail needs to be repeatedly said
— Apr 17, 2024 09:53AM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)


Starlight
Starlight is 26% done
It just keeps getting worse and worse

This is such shitty writing.

My gods. I feel like going on a rampage from the amount of shit books I’ve stumbled upon recently.
— Apr 16, 2024 11:21PM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)


Starlight
Starlight is 11% done
Ugh
How is it that two authors are working on one book and it’s still such a clusterfuck of a mess to read.

Not to mention the weird writing style
I can’t pinpoint what it is that’s bothering me rn bc I’m mostly just annoyed at how this started, And, how it’s going so far.

Ugh
— Apr 16, 2024 11:04PM
The Sutra of Spring (Solstice Shield, #1)


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