Starlight’s Reviews > The Sutra of Spring > Status Update

^even for someone that desperate for money, this fmc bitch just rubs me the wrong fucking way.

It’s clear the authors’ intentions for her to be a “badass boss bitch” fmc, but it fell so far off the track.. like her fucking cocked hip. (And expression and pose has just now become a peeve of mine, BC OF THIS SHIT WRITING)

🤦🏻‍♀️ At this point, all this ranting was stalling before reading again

This bitch has the audacity to break into a home, her literal job was to guard, and then not say anything when she’s caught red handed, AND THEN, have a fucking attitude about it.

Imo, it’s a moot point if her “boss” paid her to do it, that entire scene was so sketchy.

THIS is the fmc I’m supposed to be rooting for?!?? Fuck off

Admittedly, I didn’t read every damn word so far, so I may be missing most of the context.. but this is such a poorly written mc.

I could forgive most things, but if the MAIN CHARACTER is shit, ON TOP of every other character being shit, 🤦🏻‍♀️
There’s just no hope here.

Ugh. When you dread reading a book… you know it’s bad.

I hate this fmc. I hate everything about her. And I hate the way she’s written. This bitch has cocked her fucking hip so many times, my mental image of her has become a twisted gnarled branch. I almost said twig, but every fucking character describes her as being big and muscular, but pretty???

The fact that every shit detail needs to be repeatedly said

It just keeps getting worse and worse

This is such shitty writing.

My gods. I feel like going on a rampage from the amount of shit books I’ve stumbled upon recently.

Ugh
How is it that two authors are working on one book and it’s still such a clusterfuck of a mess to read.

Not to mention the weird writing style
I can’t pinpoint what it is that’s bothering me rn bc I’m mostly just annoyed at how this started, And, how it’s going so far.

Ugh