Rina’s Reviews > The Dark Storm > Status Update

like no way this author called an asian character as having skin the color of a "freshly ripened banana" HELLO???????????

as i read there's definitely a lot of telling instead of showing in some places. there's also so many characters being introduced, and it's getting a little convoluted. i can see the plot and how it ties together, but it's definitely a lot, especially for how short this book is

trying to be forgiving bc i read that this is one of greene's earlier books, but the writing style is awkward at times and a little repetitive/redundant, but overall it's not bad. i've definitely read worse written books.