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Ooops, pg 203 - huge plot hole: "You have been the
only bright spot in my life since…well, since my sister. After she died, I knew
I could never again let someone in, because when they left it hurt too much." - he only learned about his sister AFTER Sammy came to stay!!!
— Jan 19, 2016 11:18AM
only bright spot in my life since…well, since my sister. After she died, I knew
I could never again let someone in, because when they left it hurt too much." - he only learned about his sister AFTER Sammy came to stay!!!
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Just finished Ch 15, and had a couple of WTF moments. OK 2nd time they've had sex, but only a spit f*cking??? Nope. And Sammy as a Dom??? Nope. Not working, oh dear.
— Jan 17, 2016 09:19AM
