A’s Reviews > When the Moon Hatched > Status Update
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is 60% done
It's still so damn long. But I want to see how one particular element plays out. Also.. shockingly.. the writing has illicited a lump in my throat. Especially when the MC takes the FMC down below to the cave. Yup, it hit me in the feels.
— Jul 11, 2024 09:35PM
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is 20% done
Can I just say that I completely understand what everyone is saying about the writing of this book. Like sometimes... just calling a candle a candle is the better option... rather than calling it a glowing but small flame that ignites with a potent power and keeps the darkness at bay.
(FYI - that metaphor was not included in the book... just me using my limited writing capability to make a point).
— Jul 11, 2024 01:08PM
(FYI - that metaphor was not included in the book... just me using my limited writing capability to make a point).
