A’s Reviews > When the Moon Hatched > Status Update

It's still so damn long. But I want to see how one particular element plays out. Also.. shockingly.. the writing has illicited a lump in my throat. Especially when the MC takes the FMC down below to the cave. Yup, it hit me in the feels.

Can I just say that I completely understand what everyone is saying about the writing of this book. Like sometimes... just calling a candle a candle is the better option... rather than calling it a glowing but small flame that ignites with a potent power and keeps the darkness at bay.

(FYI - that metaphor was not included in the book... just me using my limited writing capability to make a point).