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Lindsey is 13% done

"The meadow had now been harvested and is empty." This makes me want to pull my hair out.

— Feb 21, 2016 08:42AM

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Lindsey is 30% done

"The killer was in this cave with me. My vow is furious and heartfelt." WHY? Why would you change tense there? That makes no sense.

— Feb 21, 2016 09:48AM

Lindsey is 21% done

Did anyone edit this? Even informally?

— Feb 21, 2016 09:07AM

Lindsey is 13% done

I want to read this book, but the weird verb tense shifts and lack of commas are very distracting.

— Feb 21, 2016 08:39AM

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