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"The killer was in this cave with me. My vow is furious and heartfelt." WHY? Why would you change tense there? That makes no sense.

"The meadow had now been harvested and is empty." This makes me want to pull my hair out.

I want to read this book, but the weird verb tense shifts and lack of commas are very distracting.