Donna Davis’s Reviews > The Disappeared > Status Update
Donna Davis
is 44% done
I am starting to feel that the writer tries to do too much, causing the plot to wander. Philosophical musings and heavy metal in the midst of a disappeared girl...where is this plot headed? I think we need some editing here so the plot can move forward, instead of meandering.
— Feb 24, 2016 10:05PM
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Donna Davis
is 38% done
Different threads change off to build suspense. Old trick but it works. Still this is not the one I reach for first. Other reviewers indicate that disparate threads will come together, which makes sense, so I will keep reading.
— Feb 22, 2016 04:34PM
Donna Davis
is 38% done
Different threads change off to build suspense. Old trick but it works. Still this is not the one I reach for first.
— Feb 22, 2016 04:32PM